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33rd translation contest: "Back to the playground" » English to German

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[...] “I have a proposal.” It leaned forward like my friend April does when she wants to tell a secret, even though none of her secrets are any good. Or even really secrets. “If you don’t tell anyone I am here, I can fix your eyes.”
“Get out of town!”
It blinked a couple of times. “That is what I am attempting to do.”
“What I mean is you can’t do that!”
“Why not?”
“Well, no one else has been able to fix my eyes, besides with glasses.”
“I have certain abilities. You will see, provided…”
“…I don’t tell anyone about you?”
“That is the heart of it, that is the nub.”
“How do I know you won’t blind me? You could be like one of those telemarketers making promises but totally lying.”
It started waxing on, waxing off again. “I would not do such a thing to a creature who has done me no harm.”
“Meaning if I harmed you, you could make me go blind?”
“That’s on a need-to-know basis.”
“And if you fix my eyes, and I don’t tell anyone about you, you’ll leave our fields?”
“That’s the heart of it!” [...]

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Entry #38207 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Germany
Winner
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234 x42 x23 x1
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Es beugte sich vor, wie meine Freundin April es zu tun pflegt, wenn sie mir ein Geheimnis verraten will, wobei ihre Geheimnisse normalerweise weder interessant noch wirklich geheim sind.
Flows well
Dr. Matthias Schauen
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Mach dich vom Acker!
Good term selection
Well chose​n, because​ at the en​d we learn​ that the ​thing is s​upposed to​ leave act​ual "field​s".
Sade Mielczarek
meine Sicht zu korrigieren
Flows well
Schön gelö​st.
Irene Schlotter, Dipl.-Übers.
Knackpunkt
Good term selection
Arendine Hoewe
das Blaue vom Himmel versprechen, dir aber in Wirklichkeit die Hucke volllügen
Good term selection
B&B FinTrans
Entry #38237 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Germany
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„Ach geh!“
Good term selection
Dr. Matthias Schauen
die etwas versprechen, aber lügen wie gedruckt
Flows well
B&B FinTrans
Entry #38179 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Germany
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143 x402 x1
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+1
einem das Blaue vom Himmel
Flows well
Nadia Silva Castro
gestikulieren
Good term selection
The only s​olution in​ the final​s that wor​ks, IMO, f​or this re​ference to​ a hands m​ovement de​scribed in​ the conte​xt precedi​ng the exc​erpt: "All​ the hands​ came up a​t once and​ spiraled ​around, li​ke it was ​doing the ​‘wax on, w​ax off’ ma​neuver."
Dr. Matthias Schauen
„Ganz genau!“
Flows well
Nadia Silva Castro
Entry #38036 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Germany
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Ich mache Dir einen Vorschlag
Flows well
Anette Hilgendag
+1
"Mach Dich vom Acker!" Es blinzelte ein paar Mal. "Genau das versuche ich zu tun."
Flows well
Irene Schlotter, Dipl.-Übers.
+1
tut
Flows well
A nice opt​ion if one​ wants to ​stay away ​from the m​ore litera​l "vertrau​lich".
Dr. Matthias Schauen
Entry #37681 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Germany
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71 x41 x21 x1
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+2
Und eigentlich auch keine echten Geheimnisse sind
Flows well
B&B FinTrans
„Echt jetzt? Ach komm!"
Flows well
Irene Schlotter, Dipl.-Übers.
Blaue vom Himmel versprechen
Flows well
Nadia Silva Castro
-1
„Das ist Verschlusssache."
Good term selection
Claudia Matt
Entry #38053 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Not specified
Thomas Byrne
Thomas Byrne
United Kingdom
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0000
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Entry #37792 — Discuss 0 — Variant: Germany
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