Sep 22, 2004 18:03
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How should I read this sentence:
“Accordingly, the compounds of formula I may be employed for prevention or treatment of insulin resistance associated with obesity, glucose intolerance, diabetes mellitus, hypertension and ischemic diseases of the large and small blood vessels.”?
1.
Accordingly, the compounds of formula I may be employed for prevention or treatment of insulin resistance associated with (obesity, glucose intolerance, diabetes mellitus, hypertension and ischemic diseases of the large and small blood vessels).
or
2.
Accordingly, the compounds of formula I may be employed for prevention or treatment of:
-insulin resistance associated with obesity
-glucose intolerance
-diabetes mellitus
-hypertension
-ischemic diseases of the large and small blood vessels.
“Accordingly, the compounds of formula I may be employed for prevention or treatment of insulin resistance associated with obesity, glucose intolerance, diabetes mellitus, hypertension and ischemic diseases of the large and small blood vessels.”?
1.
Accordingly, the compounds of formula I may be employed for prevention or treatment of insulin resistance associated with (obesity, glucose intolerance, diabetes mellitus, hypertension and ischemic diseases of the large and small blood vessels).
or
2.
Accordingly, the compounds of formula I may be employed for prevention or treatment of:
-insulin resistance associated with obesity
-glucose intolerance
-diabetes mellitus
-hypertension
-ischemic diseases of the large and small blood vessels.
Responses
3 +12 | Number 1 | Alaa Zeineldine |
5 | Number 2 | Orbital |
5 | useful ref. | DGK T-I |
3 | A warning.... | Richard Benham |
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Number 1
A search shows that insulin resistance seems to be linked to these other conditions. Here is one example:
http://www.wdxcyber.com/ngen10.htm:
"Insulin resistance is an impaired metabolic response to our body's own insulin so that active muscle cells cannot take up glucose as easily as they should. In that situation, the blood insulin levels are chronically higher which inhibits our fat cells from giving up their energy stores to let us lose weight. This disorder is associated with obesity, hypertension, abnormal triglycerides, glucose intolerance (syndrome 'X") and Type 2 diabetes mellitus"
http://www.wdxcyber.com/ngen10.htm:
"Insulin resistance is an impaired metabolic response to our body's own insulin so that active muscle cells cannot take up glucose as easily as they should. In that situation, the blood insulin levels are chronically higher which inhibits our fat cells from giving up their energy stores to let us lose weight. This disorder is associated with obesity, hypertension, abnormal triglycerides, glucose intolerance (syndrome 'X") and Type 2 diabetes mellitus"
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Elena Sgarbo (X)
: I was about to paste the exact same reference!! Yes, it's option number 1 :-))
5 mins
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It's a small Google : )
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Clauwolf
18 mins
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n/a (X)
: Yes, number 1...
28 mins
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Richard Benham
: Of Barbara's two options--which are the only ones possible on a strict reading--this is the only one which makes sense. -> Nizamettin: The parentheses are to show the grouping!
32 mins
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Nizamettin Yigit
: Actually I think, there is no reason to put the segment within the parenthesis. It reads fine.
41 mins
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Thanks. It does read fine. I believe that Barbara used the parentheses only to demonstrate association, not to rewrite the text.
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Madeleine MacRae Klintebo
59 mins
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Armorel Young
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Orbital
: Both my parents are diabetics so I know what I am talking about. Sorry but hypertension doesnt cause insulin resistance.
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Thanks, and I wish your parents well. Association between medical conditions is not restricted to cause. In any case, references abound pointing to association between the two conditions, which may not be the case with your parents.
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DGK T-I
: associated with ischaemic heart disease too (eg: http://www.acnem.org/journal/18-1_april_1999/insulin_resista... )
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Jörgen Slet
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Johanne Bouthillier
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Martinique
: Insulin resistance is now being recognized as a common syndrome that is associated with...glucose intolerance, obesity, hypertension, dyslipidemia, and atherosclerosis (Manual Of Endocrinology And Metabolism, Ed. N.Lavin, 2002,Lippincott:Williams&Wilkins)
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Ann Nosova
: what is the problem, the connection between diabetes and vessels' diseases (esp.small ones) is well-known
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Saleh Chowdhury, Ph.D.
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Alfa Trans (X)
3 days 1 hr
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Many thanks to all of you!"
54 mins
A warning....
You are quite right in identifying those two possible readings of the sentence. They are the only two logically possible.
However, many authors are a bit slack with conjucntions and punctuation, and so it is possible that the following was intended:
"Accordingly, the compounds of formula I may be employed for prevention or treatment of insulin resistance associated with (obesity, glucose intolerance, diabetes mellitus, [and] hypertension) and ischemic diseases of the large and small blood vessels.”
The text seems otherwise well-written, and so I consider this unlikely. I would prefer your interpretation 1, as already supported by Alaa.
However, many authors are a bit slack with conjucntions and punctuation, and so it is possible that the following was intended:
"Accordingly, the compounds of formula I may be employed for prevention or treatment of insulin resistance associated with (obesity, glucose intolerance, diabetes mellitus, [and] hypertension) and ischemic diseases of the large and small blood vessels.”
The text seems otherwise well-written, and so I consider this unlikely. I would prefer your interpretation 1, as already supported by Alaa.
2 hrs
Number 2
This was in bad english but it sounds like you are about to be employed to administer this drug to people with these symtoms. My parents are diabetics, type one and type two. Hypertension doesnt cause insulin resistance.
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DGK T-I
: quote: "hypertension,obesity,ischaemic heart disease,dyslipidaemia and non-insulin-dependant diabetes mellit[u]s are major diseases in which insulin resistance has a clearly demonstrated relationship with the aetiology and clinical course of thedisease"
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useful ref.
"Should there be any disturbances to the binding of insulin to the receptors, or of the receptor response to insulin, there will be reduced insulin activity, or insulin resistance. If insulin is not functioning, there is reduced glucose entry into the cells, which is detected by the pancreas as raised blood sugar (hyperglycaemia). The pancreatic response is then to produce more insulin, (hyperinsulinaemia) to compensate for the lack of cellular response to the hyperglycaemia. Insulin resistance has been estimated to occur in up to 25% of the ‘normal’ non-diabetic population of the USA5, at least as commonly as obesity. Poor insulin activity and chronically elevated blood insulin levels are associated with a number of serious diseases. Among these, hypertension6, obesity7,8, ischaemic heart disease9, dyslipidaemia10 and non-insulin-dependant diabetes mellitis11 are major diseases in which insulin resistance has a clearly demonstrated relationship with the aetiology and clinical course of the disease. The cluster of findings of hypertension, dyslipidaemia and hyperinsulinism has been labelled Syndrome X."
from:
Insulin Resistance, Obesity And Diabetes: The Connection
Robyn Cosford MB, BS (Hons), FACNEM
Journal of the Australasian College of Nutritional & Environmental Medicine, Vol. 18, No. 1, April 1999, pages 3-10
http://www.acnem.org/journal/18-1_april_1999/insulin_resista...
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(full article in link)
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The spelling of Mellitus doesn\'t alter my impression from a quick reading (before posting it as an example) - the article appears to be written in sensible scientific language and from apparently respectable sources, which surely is what matters for our purposes.
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(In view of this it seems unnecessary to go to a more prestigious journal, in this instance anyway.)
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(And of course, other respectable authorities online & off say the same thing about the link)
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(between insulin resistance & isch. h d
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from:
Insulin Resistance, Obesity And Diabetes: The Connection
Robyn Cosford MB, BS (Hons), FACNEM
Journal of the Australasian College of Nutritional & Environmental Medicine, Vol. 18, No. 1, April 1999, pages 3-10
http://www.acnem.org/journal/18-1_april_1999/insulin_resista...
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Note added at 3 hrs 46 mins (2004-09-22 21:50:13 GMT)
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(full article in link)
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Note added at 2 days 15 hrs 30 mins (2004-09-25 09:34:17 GMT) Post-grading
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The spelling of Mellitus doesn\'t alter my impression from a quick reading (before posting it as an example) - the article appears to be written in sensible scientific language and from apparently respectable sources, which surely is what matters for our purposes.
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Note added at 2 days 15 hrs 41 mins (2004-09-25 09:44:42 GMT) Post-grading
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(In view of this it seems unnecessary to go to a more prestigious journal, in this instance anyway.)
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Note added at 2 days 17 hrs 38 mins (2004-09-25 11:41:40 GMT) Post-grading
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(And of course, other respectable authorities online & off say the same thing about the link)
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Note added at 2 days 17 hrs 40 mins (2004-09-25 11:43:35 GMT) Post-grading
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(between insulin resistance & isch. h d
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Note added at 2 days 17 hrs 40 mins (2004-09-25 11:43:45 GMT) Post-grading
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Peer comment(s):
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Richard Benham
: That's "diabetes mellitus", Giuli.
8 hrs
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wasn't my spelling,quoting someone else's article for useful content... if Richard likes he could raise it with the author(the article seems respectable,I presume Richard will have seen that for himself by reading some of it carefully before he commented)
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