Nov 13, 2007 22:49
16 yrs ago
Russian term
United States
Exemplary quality, truly bilingual
Native in: Russian 
, English
Works in: Russian to English, English to Russian, English
осуществить мероприятия по улучшению обслуживания
Russian to English
Bus/Financial
Business/Commerce (general)
Для достижения этой цели требуется провести модернизацию XXX и осуществить мероприятия по улучшению обслуживания.
Attainment of this goal requires modernization of XXX and...
I wish I could just write "improvement," but it's not quite the same thing, although it would make the whole sentence nicer and simpler.
Attainment of this goal requires modernization of XXX and...
I wish I could just write "improvement," but it's not quite the same thing, although it would make the whole sentence nicer and simpler.
Proposed translations
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Proposed translations
+3
6 mins
Nik-On/Off
Ukraine
Ukraine
Native in Russian
Ukraine
careful, caring, and perfectionist
Native in: Russian 
, Ukrainian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, Ukrainian to English, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
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30
Selected
(taking/implementing) measures to improve...
хотя, мне кажется, можно и просто improvement написать
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Tatevik Hovhannisyan
: "осуществить мероприятия по улучшению..." - канцелярит, improvement звучит по-английски.
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Roxana La Russe
15 hrs
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Tatiana N. (X)
1 day 4 mins
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you, everyone!"
+2
9 mins
Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
United Kingdom
Translator since 1953
Native in: English
Works in: Russian to English, German to English, English
Related KudoZ points
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423
to take measures to improve servicing
If I cant get rid of "осуществить" altogether, I prefer to use as short a word as possible for it, rather than "implement" or "facilitate".
Peer comment(s):
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Amy Lesiewicz
: I'd use "service" rather than "servicing"; maybe that's a US/UK difference.
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Thank you. Not really. Service, services, servicing; they mean slightly different things, but you need more context to decide which.
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Alexander Kondorsky
: take action to improve the quality of services
7 hrs
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Thank you.
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23 mins
Jennifer Guernsey
United States
United States
Native in English
United States
25+ yrs exp: pharma, medicine, biology
Native in: English
Works in: Russian to English
Related KudoZ points
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8
to take steps to improve service
I'm just not fond of "measures"--sounds a bit stilted to me.
"Service" could also be "servicing" or even "maintenance", depending on the context.
"Service" could also be "servicing" or even "maintenance", depending on the context.
Peer comment(s):
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Roman Bardachev
14 mins
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Thank you, Roman.
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Vanda Nissen
9 hrs
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Thank you, Vanda.
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2 hrs
to make efforts to better services
to make efforts to improve services
7 hrs
Susan Skelly
Native in English
Specializes in field
Because it's not all Latin to me!
Native in: English
Works in: Russian to English, English to Russian
host an event for the betterment of...
In order to reach/attain this/our goal(s), it is necessary to host an event for the betterment of......
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However, to make this more English, I would say something along the lines of:
Hosting an event for the betterment of .... is necessary In order to reach/attain this/our goal(s).
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Note added at 7 hrs (2007-11-14 05:54:22 GMT)
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However, to make this more English, I would say something along the lines of:
Hosting an event for the betterment of .... is necessary In order to reach/attain this/our goal(s).
10 hrs
improvement/enhancement of customer experience
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