Jun 1, 2006 20:07
18 yrs ago
English term

through an elm track?

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature short story fiction
and after many hours, we left the town through an elm path that led to

or by an elm path that???

The path is bordered by elms.
I would like some help as regards the preposition (are both possible?)
and the premodification. If I use "elm path", is it clear that the path is bordered by elms. Or do I have to say "bordered by..."
Many many thanks...

Responses

+13
4 mins
Selected

elm-bordered, elm-fringed

To me it isn't clear that an elm path is a path bordered by elms, so I think you need to bring out this meaning.

You would, though, go "by" a path rather than "through" one.
Peer comment(s):

agree Can Altinbay
5 mins
agree Melanie Nassar : elm-lined
7 mins
agree Sophia Finos (X)
11 mins
agree jccantrell : Yes, an elm path could be a path through a forest of elm trees, not what he is proposing.
19 mins
agree Peter Shortall : and with Melanie's "elm-lined"
22 mins
agree Will Matter : "By an elm-fringed path..." sounds good.
27 mins
agree Refugio : elm-lined is more conventional, but elm-fringed is more poetic
49 mins
agree Susanne Rindlisbacher : with Melanie
1 hr
agree Asghar Bhatti
3 hrs
agree Peter Enright
7 hrs
agree Alison Jenner
11 hrs
agree Isodynamia
17 hrs
agree Alfa Trans (X)
18 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "excelentes respuestas. many thanks"
+1
13 mins

by an elm path (or lane)

I think most people would say "by", but "through" would work just as well. "track" could give some wrong associations, so use path or lane. Or say "a path bordered by elms".
Peer comment(s):

agree George Rabel : Yes, I´d avoid the word "track", as my first thought was an "elk track".
13 mins
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